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Thursday, January 30, 2014

The Hero's Feet


Once upon a time, in a land not so far away, lived a boy named Ten Towes. Ten was the tenth of eleventh brothers, and as you may have guessed, his parents did not possess much imagination, though they did love their children and each other. They lived together in a small home on a bean farm they tended for Mr. Giant.  

It was a busy life for Ten, planting the beans with his brothers, watching the sky for rain, daydreaming, weeding and harvesting. And he was happy. That is, until an odd growth spurt in his thirteenth year. He went to bed one night a normally proportioned boy, but woke to find his feet had grown four sizes. His brothers found this quite amusing and teased him mercilessly.

“Hey, here comes big foot,” they would yell. Or, “Ten will never be able to step close enough to kiss a girl. His feet will always be in the way.”

Ten would just smile and continue his work, but inside he was hurt, just a little.

By his sixteenth birthday, Ten was still five foot seven inches tall, with a shoe size of 20. In short, his feet were huge. But there were bigger problems afoot. There had been no rain since April, and now, in the heat of the summer, the sky still showed no sign of rainclouds and the beans were struggling. No beans meant Mr. Giant would kick them off the land and worse, the people in the village would go hungry.

Ten struggled to think of something he could do to help. He thought and thought and thought. Finally, he came up with an idea. (For while his parents may have been devoid of imagination, Ten was gifted with a flair for whimsy.) He decided to do a rain dance, and that’s exactly what he did.

During the night, while his parents, One through Nine and Eleven slept in their cozy little beds, Ten went out to the bean field. He’d never danced before. Fear of stepping on his partner’s toes had held him back. But he would not be put off.

He listened to the wind rattling the dry and nearly leafless branches of the trees bordering the field until he caught a rhythm. First he tapped his big toes. Then he wiggled his bottom. Then his knees got in the game and he started to move around the field. He went around once, then twice. The breeze grew stronger. He danced up and down the rows, more animated with each step. Soon his arms were waving and a cloud sashayed across the moon. He continued to dance, perspiring and waving, weaving and bobbing. The starlight was gone but slashes of white lit the sky. Still he danced dances that he didn’t even know how to dance, up and down and around, his enormous feet kicking up dust and making ruts around the parched little plants. And then it happened. The stubborn sky let loose a few drops of rain, warm and welcome on Ten’s sweaty face. But he didn’t stop until the rain came down in sheets and began to fill the ruts his dancing had made throughout the field.

When he finally stopped moving and stood still in gratitude, he realized his family was there at the edge of the plot, watching him and smiling. Their faces were wet with more than rain. They hugged him and thanked him, and would forever tell the story of their hero’s feet, and how he saved them all.

Monday, January 27, 2014

in the dugout


dugout time

is measured in ups and outs

 

bats crack and

speeding balls thump

into outstretched gloves

 

innings spread ahead

in summer twilight

sinking sun blinds outfielders and

runners slide home

spitting sand

 

stats are kept

scores tallied

triumph snagged from

defeat

 

clouds of dirt and ebullience reign

gifts from the gods

 

Thursday, January 9, 2014

The Future Road


Jarod breaths deep as he speeds along. His body vibrates in a rough rhythm to the road striations. The engine hums beneath him and the tires squeals as he rounds the corner.

Almost there.

He tops the hill and there’s the whole valley spread out below him. All downhill now, literally. Jarod chuckles at his clever little joke. It sounds strange inside his helmet.

He can see Jamie’s house next to the river. He hopes her parents aren’t there. He wants privacy.

The rapid drop in altitude makes his stomach flip. The task ahead of him may be another factor in his discomfiture, but he’s not thinking about that yet. He’s focusing on the crisp fall air, the smell of leaves and mowed hay, the sound resistance of the wind as it passes over his helmet and around his body. He’s in the moment. Jamie taught him that.

He leans left and angles the bike off the road and onto the long gravel driveway. She’s out the door before he even has a chance to kill the ignition.

“I thought you’d never get here.” She looks up at him, a smile flirting at the corners of her mouth.

He leans down and rests his forehead against hers inhaling her scent. There are tears in his eyes when he pulls away.

“What’s wrong?” She touches his cheek.

“I’ve been thinking about you. About us. It’s just that I love you so much.”

“And I love you too.”

Jarod took a deep breath.

“Then prove it.”

“How?”

“Well, everyone around here has expectations. Your parents. My parents. The teachers. My boss.”

“I know. So?”

“It’s just so much to deal with. We’re prisoners of their expectations, strangling on what and who they think we are and should be. I just want to be with you.”

He pulls a box from his pocket. Jamie gasps as he opens the box revealing an antique silver ring.

“Before my mom she gave me my grandma’s ring. She said someday, if I was lucky, I’d find the right woman to wear it.”

He looks up at her, expectant, nervous.

“I know we’re young, but I feel like someday is today. This is the right moment to claim our lives, to be who we want to be. I am the best me when I’m with you, Jamie.”

Jarod lowers himself to one knee.

“Will you marry me?”

And Jamie says, “Yes.”

Wednesday, January 1, 2014

Daredevils

By

Susan Reetz

 

That old man shuffles down my sidewalk, head buried in his parka hood.

Mind the slippery spots. Please, please, mind the slippery spots! I send these urgent messages telepathically through the window. He doesn’t even glance up. Just shambles on, cane held aloft as though he expects danger to come from the air rather than beneath his feet.

I snuggle into my blanket and sip my tea.

How many times have I seen him out there? He makes his rounds regular as clockwork. Tick tock, its old Doc, taking his walk around the block. Kind of a daring feat for someone as old as him. He pauses near my driveway to catch his breath.

My children used to play on that driveway – and, when I wasn’t watching, in that street. They were all daredevils. Skateboards and bicycles and roller skates. Anything with wheels it seemed. Their only speed was breakneck but even so, they never got worse than scrapes and bruises. I had enjoyed their energy and loved to hear the excited screams, each child trying to be more daring than the others.

I hear a scream now, emanating not with excitement, but pain and fear.

I stand, blanket falling to the floor. Doc lies flat on the sidewalk, hand scrabbling for his cane which is now beyond his grasp.

I grab the blanket, throw it over my shoulders, and rush out the door. The snow squeaks and my feet register the cold through my thin slippers but there’s no time to put on boots.

“Doc, can you hear me?”

I kneel, looking him over. He looks at me and blinks. I imagine he must be stunned. Maybe his ears are ringing?

“Doc,” I enunciate very carefully and pitch my volume toward bellow. “Are you hurt?”

“I just fell on the ice. What the hell do you think? Of course I’m hurt.”

Tears gather in the corners of his eyes.

“Can you sit up?”

“I don’t know.”

Slowly he rolls to his right elbow and eases himself up to sitting. I don’t see any blood, and there don’t seem to be any broken bones, but there’s a scrape on his chin and a bruise blooming above his eye. He’ll need to see a doctor.

My kids gave me a cell phone years ago in case I have trouble and always nag me to keep it with me. But I can never find it. Why do they make those things so small anyway? They get pretty upset if I’m out and about and they can’t reach me. What if I have another heart attack, they say. How would you call for help, they wonder. I don’t need them fussing at me all the time, but I don’t want them to worry either. They’re not getting any younger. My friend Shirley has one of those gadgets that you wear all the time and if you need an ambulance you just push the button and it calls one for you. She really likes it, says it gives her peace of mind, so I got one too.

I sit down next to Doc, fix the blanket so we are covered together, push the button, and wait. I sure hope they hurry.